Lynn, your writing makes the feelings so, so clear. The only things I would suggest for you is to start with the strongest sentence because that’s all people will see in the feed — and perhaps more white space. I find that my reading numbers go down if I have paragraphs that are more thank 4–5 lines. Also, if you’re writing every day anyway, maybe have a look at 100 Naked Words. (It’s a daily writing publication)

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