Hi Martha. You’re right — your writing is solid. It can be so frustrating, right? Can I make a suggestion? I notice you publish a lot in P.S. I’m a writer there, too, but I’ve found that they’ve grown so big I don’t get much traction there anymore. You might want to try Mind Cafe and Curious just to see how they do by comparison. You might find new eyes that don’t know you and that might help. Thanks for wading through the tome. lol.