Hey Tyler — first I want to say thank you. As I’ve been visiting stories in the thread, I’ve seen that sometimes you beat me there. Thanks for doing the joining in part!
The best feedback I could give you is to always look for a really strong first sentence. When your story shows up in other people’s feed, they will see the title, the photo, and the first sentence. If you can run with a first sentence that’s strong or makes them curious, that will help pull people in to read.
Thanks again! :)