Charles, you come so darn close. You really do. Here’s a couple of examples.
You have one called: We Were the Parents of the Sickest Baby in the Neonatal Intensive Care Unit
Know what I’d name that? The Sickest Baby In Neonatal ICU Was My Son
The difference is that the strong word “sickest” is at the beginning. We were the parents of… is a weaker way to start. You know?
You have another called: Why I Engage Online Trolls
Here’s a couple of suggestions for that one:
— I Do Feed The Trolls. Because They Squirm.
or
— Don’t Tell Me Not To Feed The Trolls. Here’s Why I Do!
I also think your background color might be hurting your reads. Often people with sensitive eyes will skip past colored backgrounds with white text. If you made it a pale enough color to use black text, you might find your reads go up.
:)
P.S. Good to see you again!